Alternate Services

Page Notes – $200

Notes, impressions, observations etc., T. Jay has on your story, written directly on script pages as and where experienced – NO WRITTEN CRITIQUE.

Some writers prefer seeing precisely where an impression, bad or good, is made on an objective reader. This service provides for two thorough readings of the screenplay with copious page and margin notes, highlighting specific incidents, characters, plot points, story lines, etc.  Not as comprehensive as the Regular Analysis, but enables writers to see immediately where story may begin to get off-track. Please ensure a self-addressed and stamped envelope large enough to return script to sender is submitted with the script when selecting this service.

Short-Form Evaluation – $175

This service includes two thorough readings of the script plus a 2 – 3 page written overview of major points needing to be discussed. For the writer who wishes to discover what made the biggest impressions, positively and negatively, on an informed and objective reader and wants to hear “the broad strokes” as a reaction, this service is an economic answer to your needs. Page Notes are not included with this service.

Writers who select either of these two services and wish to discuss aspects of their script or notes may choose to have a follow up Phone Conversation with T. Jay at a rate of $40 per 30 minutes.

One Hour Phone Conversation — $150

This service includes two thorough readings of the script. At a mutually convenient time T. Jay will be prepared to discuss with the writer topics relevant to the development of the script. Subjects not covered yet thought to be useful and important by T. Jay will be brought up as well. Writer will gain an understanding as to where specific choices can lead to stronger, richer and more dramatic material. All topics writer wishes to discuss will be covered to the extent that time allows.

Additional phone conversation with T. Jay is available at a rate of $40 per 30 minutes.